Wednesday, 16 March 2016

My Narrative writting

The Camp

One beautiful sunny day, there lived Judah and Ryan sitting on the front deck at their Nana's house. So then Ryan got up and said “hey we should go to that camp that was on t.v yesterday, because we are doing nothing at all”
“but what if dad comes back with the creamy chocolate donuts and ice cream with KFC” replied Judah.
“it’s not all about eating bro you know me i’m the healthiest in the house” said Ryan
“are you trying to call me fat?”
“no no man I’m just trying to say that we should go to the camp that came on t.v, please brother can you come with me”. Ryan said
“ok fine” said Judah
“I promise that today is going to be the best day of your life” replied Ryan.

So they went to camp of champs, but once they got to camp they saw a huge man with five big German Shepherd dog’s. Then that is when Judah said “hey man I think we should go back home now”
“no man we can’t go back home I just payed 3,210 dollars you can’t just spend money like that” replied Ryan.
“But i’m about to pee my pants man please can we go back please you know me I’m scared of dogs that are big and looking like that.”
“just hold it in man don’t be a girl your a man and man’s are the strong ones,Poor what's stinks” said Ryan
“oops I think I just did it”
“You what!!

Then the man let go of the dog’s chain by accident because it was too hard to hold them well they were pulling him and then the dog’s went and bit Judah and Ryan to death for dinner. .Then the cops showed up right on time for the crime scene. So then they took the man to prison For letting the the dogs go and attack two people and he had to pay 2 million dollars to pay for the two men’s life RIP Judah and Ryan but wait Ryan was earn a life from the GODS Then the cop said to the the big man “have a good life you filthy animal.” hahaha THE END.

Friday, 4 March 2016

The deadly roller-coaster

The deadly

One day Jono decide to go and see Chris when he got there he ask Chris if he wants to go to the deadly coaster at the theme park and Jono said “if you want too” Chris and he said “ok this will be Awesome”. So chris said “what car shell we go in yours Jono or my car”? So Jono replied back let's go in my car ok sweet. It will take 45min to get there “ok” said Chris so they turn up the music and started to singing my Youth.

When they got there Jono said “I’m going to the deadly coaster” “ok” said Chris “I’ll follow you ok then” replied Jono it was a 1 seat per person so Chris said you go first and Jono said oh thank bro but do you really want to go first? No thanks said Chris ok said Jono so he went on it he first went up 150 meter up. And then he went fast as flash he went thru a cave and when he went in he went down and hit the ground hard. When he hit the ground hard he was calling for help because he wasn't that far from where he started cause it was like 25 block away.

And Then heard something and then he heard it again it was Jono calling out for help so he went to go and see but it was to late another ride was coming and then the person that was riding he fell down on top of Jono and he died it was too late The end.